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AsukaHotaru's avatar

You put granny Pearl and her banana theory four paragraphs ahead of the bedroom feed and I laughed at it, properly, and then spent a while cross with you about that. The mushy apple thrown for the possum is bothering me more than the ending is. XDDD

Michael Hatcher's avatar

Haha! Thanks for reading

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That was quite a dark story in places but it was excellent in its pacing and how you laid it out. A great read.

Michael Hatcher's avatar

Thanks, man! I appreciate you reading!